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  • jpolk0

    right now it's pretty much screamin' yesterday, man.

    lose the 45°s and pixel fonts. were supposed to be talking elegant here. get some anti-aliasing up in there.

    if you are going to use a brown/tan, opt for something that pops a bit more/is a bit stronger, and introduce it elsewhere first.

    that said, i like the format & white border, but you really need to add some personality.

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