Could I get a crit?

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  • Soler0

    I don't think that the icon looks much like a box open.. I mean I see ehat you are doing but I don't think it has enpugh visual reference...

    Since packaging is 3D, I would suggets taking your mark and then making it a 3 dimensional object. Its a nice 2D start.

    Also, the logo text is a bit "off the shelf" and could use some customization. And i don't really did Futura or whatever you chose for the tag. It is too bold. maybe a fine serif or something scripty.

    Hope that helps!

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