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- kodap0
Your piece looks very nice and eye catching, however I'm going to leave you with some some points i'd like to see you make to improve this:
-the Blue on the top - "rock/rodeo".. maybe replace with the same stroke / effect and colors as '2' and '3' numbers bellow.
-the date, use numerics. and bigger- people liek to know WHEN the event is it gonna take place on a first sight.
- align the red circles
- the clown's nose should be round.. well, in Portugal they are.
- I like the Tv, but doesn't reflect the bi-dimensional aspect of the whole piece.. (maybe smaller and with a white stroke -yes) check the antennas and the cable.
that's it. yeah, I like it