logo crit yet again

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  • rabattski0

    1000% imo. you're choking raas too much on the biz card front. give it some space. the slanted line and name on the biz card front really kills the balance. i understand why you have that line (since it's used in the logo) but either use the same angle / colour or don't. the spacing of raas could be more. quite choked. type on the back needs attention. a bit chaotic, unbalanced. as well as too much space between the lines. logo is nice. maybe would pick a heavier helvetica neue since it loses it's power when it gets smaller. not feeling the slanted tagline. like the red/black/white feel.

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