crit/feedback plz
crit/feedback plz
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- kodap0
not feelin it yet..
just a few tips:
-you could try a few more scratches, somehow all that bold text doesnt make the comp 'breath' enough.
-give it more space between text blocks.
- people can figure out when a phone number is a phone number without the symbol, also applies to the 'e' before the email.
- the "rashmie" is not parallel to the white line, and maybe use white / acid green / darker green color combinations.
I like the use of different helveticas, keep working on that.