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  • zedvox0

    i like the concept of the piece.
    even the design is nice.
    the copy however isn't
    instead of imposing the western ideals of a child ( nba, doctor, astronaut) why not simply state.
    i want to be a child.
    all i want is my childhood.
    I want my childhood back.

    pigeonholing these kids ambitions to nba, medicine, nasa and all makes it about how these kids can truly achieve happiness thru the western ideals. which is what the rebels/terrorists use to advance their agenda.

    you also mentioned you got those quotes from the UN site...i looked and couldnt find them can you plz link it. thanks.

    i hope what i said made sense.

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