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    I hate to be the one to piss on your chips here
    I agree that the layout is nice and makes a nice juxtaposition between the child solders and their aspirations.

    However, if they're freedom is worth fighting for are you fighting for it? If not they your piece suffers from hypocrisy.

    Also, if the quotes from the kids are real...OK, but if they aren't then I think it lets the piece down. It becomes exactly what you are trying to highlight. You are using the children for your own ends, to champion a design piece, for which the cause, you do not fight for.

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