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  • atomica0

    It's not working too well visually. Some things flush left, some flush right, and one aligned center. Then those three rounded corner rectangles.... don't seem to make any sense. Your types hard to read, the cut-off at the bottom/top look doesn't really go to any meaning - although it works on your name visually, it makes the web url look like an error in your design.... meh... has potential though, i'd make the boxes smaller, add some contrast and figure out a better grid for the type?

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