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  • bomy_dick0

    not bad..
    i'd work the protfolio a bit more and sort things out. make different parts for print etc.. and give it a bit more punch with a white margin around the visual and some kind of depth or something..
    also i found (but that's really down to each one taste and feel) that there is way too much text in the presentation etc.. if u can make it shorter, or make the titles bigger to stand out it will be pleasant to read

    good luck. nice work in the portfolio

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