Logo crit
Logo crit
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- atomica0
First thing that gets me is legibility, the type just gets lost in the busy-ness of the whole piece. It seems too complex with flimsy strokes and curves galore. Try it one color first and build from that I think the gradients and thin strokes are taking away from the positive negative space that you have to mess with within it.