wrong with me!!
wrong with me!!
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- vespa0
i agree with most of the comments here i'm afraid. i don't think people were specific enough, telling you something sucks is not really going to help you much.
first things first, lose that soundtrack. it's a mistake graduates are prone to making, but having cheesy positive words like "life", "irresistable", "fierce and challenging" whilst the soundtrack is banging out tired techno with "amazing" in the voiceover is going to make any creative director roll around laughing.
try to be more subtle - as someone pointed out, you clearly have technical skill. Have you considered teaming up with someone more creatively refined? Anyone from your college that you can collaborate with?