Website Critique - Kiddos Consignment

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• Projectile2

  What Ideasist said. It feels a bit like you used a template and said "ok what do I write here?" instead of thinking "whaat should the user see when they open the page?"

  Start with a strong graphic, or even a numbered list for SEO purposes, that explains it in 3 seconds.

  PS: I still don't know what consignment means. Use much simpler language, and some information hierarchy

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  • @ideaist!!!
    
    ; )ideaist
  • Is not a template. It's all custom, but that's the problem. I'm not a copywriter
    Great advice. Thanks.dbloc

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