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  • SimonFFM1

    @Hans

    Context is: Daily routine, life is ok, but you are craving for the feeling of being alive. Let's say you want to go bungee jumping, because you feel the desire of adrenaline rushing through your body. This is the kind of feeling I would like to describe.

    I now just used "... where sensuality and a craving for vitality unite."

    I am not telling the first part of the sentence, because it is giving away the title of my next book and it has to be kept secret.

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    • Sounds good to me.
      Please name your book "Bolz Deep" this time.      palimpsest
    • "...sensuality and a need* for excitementº unite"
      *urge
      *desire
      ºadventure
      *      hans_glib
    • once again, i am not a copywriter, as you can tellhans_glib
    • "desire for adventure" seems to sit well with "sensuality", tho might suggest a bit of bdsm action...hans_glib
    • thanks for the suggestions!SimonFFM
    • and no, I cannot tell you're not a copywriter and as I wasn't sure if I can trust ChatGPT, I tried to ask native speakers hereSimonFFM
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