biz card critique
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To start with the yellow "card" you refer to is NOT a business card. It is merely a holding page to show contact details.Monkeyshine, your card looks good but the rounded corners are gonna be pricey and unless you have got the cash I would drop them, old skool and do the card no justice.
Make the image more contrasty it looks washed out.
The name Monkeyshine sounds cheeky, quirky and perhaps even illustrative I do not see any of these in the card.....except the 2 "m's" look a bit like 2 monkeys' bums.
the image is nice, the typeface is good and the name is quirky (does want to make me say MOONshine alot though) its the application.
What you have to ask yourself is "what's my IDEA"
Sorry for the rant I just thought I would get you to question your work.
Apologies for the honesty!!!