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  • faxion4

    Yeah the G is not working for me

    Tweaked the R too

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    • this R is betterfooler
    • I like the R too, but the G I think can fill in and still be successfulmonospaced
    • "dork"
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    • Definitely, much better on the R. That was really the only issue I sawMondoMorphic
    • add another lined to the G from the top to the left wall on the inners fill that wack space like you did with the L maybe even add a dot to the LAQUTE
    • I like these!utopian
    • I don't liuke gold at all but I do like "dork". Still... Stod Fold pops way too much. Make it more subtle somehow. I think Gold should look like Dork.
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    • Also, instead of navy blue go with black or the darkest navy blue you can find that looks like black, basically.
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    • And that S seal looks amateurish and basic. Add some detail!
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    • Im taking you off the project for the weeken. come back on monday with a fresh set of eyes. imm not paying you to crowdsourse. fn amateur man
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    • o_0monospaced
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