Crit this dog(shit)?
Crit this dog(shit)?
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- 5timuli1
Thanks for the feedback so far. Trying a few of the suggestions out below. The tongue was never intended to be a part of the background, so I've either filled in blue or separated a bit. Hat lines definitely better in blue. Liking the curved brow line.
Typography is next, color needs a complete system thing (needs to work on everything from marketing materials to simple packaging). I'll probably also redraw this entire thing cleanly as it was just kinda thrown together to start.
- 2D does it even need the background?faxion
- I think I still lean to the more organic bone/hat shape. And if curving the brow I'd probably want to match the nose shape too.5timuli
- For me, it's a draw between 1A and 1B. I like the brow curve with 1B, but it's not a must-have.Continuity
- I think I like the blue hat lines, but yeah... now I'm not sure the background is necessary.5timuli
- flat brow looks stern in comparison to curvedfaxion
- Agreed, yeah.5timuli
- b3 the curve adds a lotcannonball1978
- You could also do 2d without the background and make the hat shortercannonball1978
- Actually nm that would lose the bone-nesscannonball1978
- D3 looks less angry. tongue/chin works better to me, and I like the highlight on the hat matching the outline.shellie