Crit this dog(shit)?
Crit this dog(shit)?
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- 5timuli8
Simpler, with eyes. Feedback from her group is "definitely eyes".
- Quite good also, but the tongue keeps messing with background.
may you try a blue outline to the tongue ?gonzalle - this one, i'm ok with the tongue. 2 colors is enough.renderedred
- I would just fill the tongue/chin with that dark blue color. I would also try to round up that line on the hat where it folds and those orangy lines on it.brt44
- Adding eyes was definitely a good decision!brt44
- Like it. I'd shrink the background circle a bit, though, clear it from the tongue.Continuity
- Thumbs upStoicLevels
- Nice! Agree with comments on tongue, with the big circle it looks like part of the shape. Could even be outlined with thinner weight?ben_
- I didn't see the tongue until I read the comments. I'd trying simplifying it as much as possible - del bg circ, 3 lines, not sure if those are ears?formed
- It's very cool and w a few sml tweaks could be a little clearer.formed
- Personal thing - I don't like sharp/acute corners on designs that mostly don't feature them (eg. nose sheen, hat folds, etc)Nairn
- Also, I dislike the 'integration' of the background circle and the tongue - the resultant shape doesn't mean anything useful.Nairn
- (besides which, the curves are wrong :) )Nairn
- Quite good also, but the tongue keeps messing with background.