Site critique please!
Site critique please!
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- detritus0
"woman aspiring to stay fitness with an active lifestyle"
"woman aspiring to stay fit with an active lifestyle"I don't understand or like the half split text - why are you making my head move so much?
Did you fucking disable my right-click, motherfucker? Why?
The ph piece looks horrible, as hayzilla says - what on earth is going on with the compression there?
if i'm honest - I don't like the figure styles in your concept artwork. Sorry, not my bag. Reminiscent of things I don't have respect for. in fact, i might consider knocking out all the concept stuff - i'm not sure what it usefully adds.
the impact of your graphic work, which seems solid, is lessened by stuff i'm not sure of the commercial value of.
- In fact, I might even consider splitting this into two sites - one just pure graphic portfolio work, the other the fashion development research 'stuff'.detritus
- Tbh, at my age and having encountered a lot of people 'in fashion' with 'ideas' i find it all very off-putting and bullshitty. Sorry.detritus
- OK, Adobe disabled my right-click, those motherfuckers.detritus
- Thanks for your comments. Are you referring to the illustrations when you mentioned figure styles?piperboytoy
- Yes. Also, I'm a blunt Northerner, so please ignore the tone of my language, I'm just to the point. With swearwords.detritus
- You're removed some stuff about fashion and clean water goals, haven't you?detritus
- *You've, even. Can't type today.detritus
- Its ok, i like blunt, i think we sugar coat too much in life but some realness is appreciated. No i didn't remove that. Its still my goal!piperboytoy
- i want to position myself to do more brand and illustrations, so I'm including those and will just replace things as I go, but it gives me room to do my own toopiperboytoy