Logo Crit
Logo Crit
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- pinkfloyd0
What do you guys think of this logo? It's for my illustration site:
- letter spacing inconsistencies and letter weight inconsistencies is distracting.MHDC
- yeah, I need to clean it up, more looking to get feedback on the bones of the logopinkfloyd
- J?********
- I think the style is cool, but the letters need to have a better "flow", they seem disjointed right now but a few tweaks and you'll have a solid logo.MHDC
- ^good advicepinkfloyd
- Is the "J" hard to read?pinkfloyd
- for starters the majority of angles are at 45 degrees... but then it deviates from that. The w, the two legs in the r are differentMHDC
- maybe the nihongo could be: 作成して破壊するshapesalad
- ^not sure what that meanspinkfloyd
- Looks a little early 2000's if that's the look you're going for.dbloc
- Sleep on it.
Then perhaps sleep on it again.detritus - Spacing's all over the place, disjointed, internally-inconsist... no flow as already said - the J is particularly egregious.
Is this based on a grid?detritus - is it KickinsWorld? The J looks like a foot. : )dbloc
- 90's thread?********
- yeah, I was inspired by the early 2000's threadpinkfloyd
- lol @ -1pinkfloyd
- in that case it's definitely on point. I'd work on the J and clean it up a bit as far as thickness and spacing.dbloc
- I meant clean it up overall as far as thickness and spacing and then consider reworking the J to make it more legible.dbloc
- Did you start on [gridded] paper, pinkle?detritus
- just two lines, but the rest was freeballingpinkfloyd
- it's quite well executed but just such a dated style now, I would go for something less stylised for a site containing your work, let the work speak for itself.fadein11
- Simple, classic, minimal which won't overpower the illustration work on the site perhaps?fadein11
- for some reason I read it as jizz world as well, but that's prob just me.fadein11
- yeah, I was concerned it didn't match my workpinkfloyd
- stop looking at japanese pornpinkfloyd
- :) share your site once up pleasefadein11
- Unless you're focusing on that anime style thing you posted recently, I'd re-consider this route - i don't see what it adds, all i can see is how it'd detractdetritus
- anime isn't my focus, so I guess I need a different logopinkfloyd
- let your work speak for itself, an elaborate logo will look like an excuse for the stuff you are showing if not careful imhofadein11
- I would never dv a work share by the way, find that a bit rude/odd.fadein11
- https://tokyofox.fil…********
- I only recently learnt that SuperDry is a British company and fuck all to do with Japan.detritus
- Jizz world though, great name.
Can't knock that.******** - I like how you guys can't read the J, but jizzworld pops out you cuntspinkfloyd
- ya... none of my Japanese tourist friends knows the brand SuperDry.pango