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  • fyoucher11

    Is this a sailing school? What's the significance of the anchor and lighthouse?

    Not sure if I dig the anchor and lighthouse idea, the anchor feel a bit cartoonish compared to the lighthouse. Maybe the lighthouse is on top of the anchor rather than morphing into it.

    It all feels a bit crammed and busy too, nothing really stands out, too much competition between elements -- i think mostly from the black ribbon in the middle. Perhaps think about simplifying things, like getting rid of the inner fills or even all the fills, less colors, and maybe think about another treatment for the stuff in the ribbon, maybe that's wrapped at the bottom.

    I like the light rays from the light house but think the only one that might work well with print is the one up top where its not overlapping other important elements.

    Not a bad start though

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