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hey brooke, your business card looks great (re pbs solicitation for input).
pink side definitely looks really good. white side a little harder to tell with it posted on a white bg.
i think it's easily good enough to get the average person you hand it to to look at your site, and the portfolio there is so good that you've got whatever job they're offering anyway.
if you're looking for ways you could change it, i'd think about the following:
i'd definitely shift your name up a couple of pixels, it looks like it's crushing the rest of the text.
i'd try to figure out a way to shift the text about somehow. at present, it's so close to the strawberry that it creates three areas of space on the card. right aligning it might balance it all better with single area of graphic, single area of space, single area of text, but probably would throw up some problems of its own.
would it be better to rethink the text side of the card, and print the whole thing on pink paper?
are there any options other than using the strawberry twice?
but as i said, that's just if you're intent on changing it, as it is i think it's more than adequate.