Star Wars Episode VII
Star Wars Episode VII
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Orphan from desert planet finds themselves pursued by stormtroopers because they are in possession of a droid with a special hologram. They stow away aboard an old space freighter and, under the guidance of an old war veteran, make their way to the rebellion after having retrieved an old hand-fighting weapon. With the help of the rebellion, they confront a conflicted nemesis and then exploit a weakness to blow up a large dangerous celestial object. Cheering on a launch pad.
- exactamundo - I still stand by my original opinion, weak storytelling with so much opportunity not to be. I reckon I could have come up with a better treatmentfadein11
- @fadein11 go on then, write a treatment and post it here
:-)Bluejam - Lol - alas I don't have time this close to Christmas... But trust me it would not include an Emo who gets easily beaten by 2 newbs and would not include yetfadein11
- another Death Star lol. The laziness is strong in this episode.fadein11
- Darth Vader was not conflicted until the very end, though.ETM
- @fadein11 - Kylo should have faired better it's true. But his training is limited and he can't control his emotions. He seems strong with the force...ETM
- ... but has poor control under stress. Demonstrated even in how how tries to swing in the crag of rocks when there is clearly no room.ETM
- And less subtle in his two childish outbursts with his "saber".ETM