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• d_rek0

  Formally, it's nice. A-n is a bit of a tough read, but since my form memory tells me that should be a lowercase 'n' that's what I read it as.

  Is there a reason you chose to not bevel or round all of the corners? Looks inconsistent having the chamfered/beveled edges of the 'a' transition to the rounded corners of the 'n'.

  The type below it is just ... bad. You should try different explorations for this type, different lock ups with the 'AN', try sentence case, etc. And for the love of god please don't letterspace it so far apart. Lets just not letterspace it period.

  Try that type below:

  Australian Natural
  Because Nature is Made of Wood

  Flush left on two lines with the type block set to the right of the mark, scale until the x-height and baseline hit the top and bottom of the AN.

  Outside of that your application is limited so it's really hard to tell if it will be succesful in context.

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