Need feedback - illustration poster

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  • oiishi0

    or throw in some mooses? or a beaver? lol, personally i don't think a maple leaf helps this poster work or not, for me i would say just keeping working at the title, you are on the right track it looks like, i feel like the title is too swirly, the tops of the letters swoop out too much for me, i also feel like the curve that the type runs along is too much somehow, i think the jon contino link is a good reference to see how he uses hand drawn type, keep working and refining on different versions you will get there, good luck!

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