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- kpl0
I seriously, seriously think you need more copy there. As is, you're not selling the marshall islands, it works more like an encyclopedia article. I think there needs to be something there that differentiates the Marshalls from any other tropical island, and that info needs to be up-front and center. It shouldn't be hidden two clicks away in the about or attractions section.