Crit. 2
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This is kinda long and nit-picky in some cases, but i hope it helps :)
INFO section
take out the extra space after "US," in Political Status
I hate widows (personal preference) maybe bring "Mean" down in "Time zone" or at least follow "Time" with (GMT)
Take out the comma after "and in
"Credit Cards"
Add a comma after "cool" in "Dress"
ATTRACTIONS Section
take out comma after "channels"
and after "sharks" in Mili
in Likiep, add an s to "mean" and take out the comma after "culture"
ACCOMMODATIONS
take out the comma before "and" in the last 3 hotels
GETTING THERE
take out comma in second paragraph