Help/Feedback please
Help/Feedback please
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- DRIFTMONKEY0
It's a bit all over the place. The intro didn't really feel like a part of everything else. Also, the print work really stands out as not being part of the digital work. Might be nice if you incorporated some more type into the digital work to explain it more. I would even suggest removing the "Who am I?" portion, as it takes the focus off the work and feels a bit forced.