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  • dubblebubble0

    heres a redo based on some of the feedback I received here. Got rid of the shark fins, the mosque. I just thickened up the type for legibility - at this point just trying to achieve the right idea. I'm thinking if I can somehow make the palm tree look a little like a T - I think it almost looks greek for some reason - maybe its the blue - or the styling of the waves.

    • id say clean it up and ship it - match the edge quality of the palm tree/font to the wavesyeeblazer
    • cool
      dubblebubble
    • huge improvement I'd say. good take on the crits posted and cool to see the evolution of thistymeframe
    • Yeh, this is much improved, sir - fair play.mikotondria3

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