Folio critique
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- dMullins0
Not seeing the point of a landing/splash page at all. If you want contact info to stand out, make it bright red in your nav or something.
If you're going to use the Mac's in your portfolio, at least edit out the words "MACBOOK PRO" because that's the first thing most people will look at when a project loads—it's the most familiar to them, so their eyes will likely go right to that.
On web work, crop out the right scrollbar area. It's a harsh break vs. the white space, and has no place in a portfolio.
Fan of the Print Oasis piece, but it is drowning in way way too much copy. As much as you want potential clients/employers to learn about the project, no one will ever read that much copy. Then you have the Herbalife project which is kind of cool, but has zero explanation copy, and the video took forever to load. For Hem Gems, there is no difference in the 1st and 2nd image, so you are essentially repeating the same image twice. Would like to see more images of the Kaia Foods project.
Just my two cents. Good stuff all around, I looked through it all.