Hey Guzman
Hey Guzman
Out of context: Reply #9
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- lukus_W20
Well - it's not totally awful, but it's nothing amazing either.
To be honest, this feels like you've taken a bunch of unfinished projects; and edited them all together with a botched pastiche of the Blair Witch Project. In the absence of any decent script or screenplay, you decided to create a 'concept piece'.
The main problem is that there's no meaningful story. Sure, it seems semi-slick - you have music, it's edited and you've done a bit of post-processing .. but I think it's lacking originality.
Tell meaningful stories. Stories that people haven't heard through mainstream channels - stories that you know well.
- This Guzman. This.
If you reject all other criticism here, embrace this post.******** - i like your comment. we put a story line together. wait for the feature...********
- perhaps you should go to a film school.pango
- This Guzman. This.