Website feedback, part 2
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- mikotondria30
Yeh, I agree with @whatthefunk; it's nearly right, the "...Enter here and plan your Astra escape...", should be a solid call to action button, something like 'explore the luxurious world of astra suites »"
Beneath that, you still need something engaging, I'd say that putting the gallery pics under there breaks off from copy too quickly - you still haven't established the voice of the brand. There I would have the three sections restaurant, villa and weddings with a pic but also benefits-explaining copy, ending with a text-link call to action, which would also be good for seo. 'Find out more about your dream tropical wedding location" etc..
Then beneath them I'd just run the photos, again with a CTO rather than just a title 'photos'..
Pictures do say a thousand words of course and the main background photo does a great job, but something like this also needs a precisely tuned voice that sounds sophisticated yet relaxed, neat but informal, select but not snooty. You need to establish the brand and have set a pleasant business tone before people have started clicking through - idly or not. It's always a hard hard soft sell, from the first second to the booking submit. Smooze people with smart witty benefits that you're sure they'll love. Stay up all night working on 10 sentences, it'll all pay off. Other than that I think it's really come a long way and I can see the attention and refinement of the graphical side, it really comes through; just try the impossible task of being a real potential customer for this place. Nice work, sir.- also maybe, make the background an alpha black from below the 'welcome explore' to the bottom...mikotondria3
- thanks. good ideas herepauliusuza