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- kona0
some suggestions and overall comments:
- the text is crazy tight and difficult to read. it comes off as tense
- loosen it up and you'll lose the widow "efforts" on your home page
- create a new class for your copyright and drop that text size in half
- you need to create a greater typographical hierarchy. objective should be bigger, body copy smaller, copyright even smaller. everything is bold and near the same size and it fights for attention
- a fullscreen b&w background image would look pretty fantastic rather than the very tight, cropped one you currently use
- footer barf. < that was actually a typo of bar but i'm going to leave it because it makes sense. the footer bar, it would really calm the page if you made it a medium shade of gray
- the butterfly looking logo is just kind of chillin all by itself. i'm not sure if it's part of your name, part of your identity or a bell and whistle for the sake of a bell and whistle to help fill the space. lose it or hang it off of the r in your nameoverall. great start. i like it's simplicity but it could really be pushed rather easily to the next level.