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- born19780
Your canvas work is cool, but your site just doesn't do it justice. Personally, I'd redo the site entirely. For the kind of job that it sounds like you're looking for (i.e. some place in marketing), I'd keep it really simple.
Also, use less work in your portfolio. You have some decent stuff in there but at the same time you have pieces in there that aren't good and just make the rest look bad. Pick your 6 best pieces for each category (or less) and get rid of the rest.
What's also a bit off is your objective. The stuff in your objective just doesn't match the stuff I'm looking at in your site. It sounds like you're a more of an analytics person that a designer (ecommerce, email marketing, visitor profile statistics, visual spec docs, examining analytics), yet you have the site of a college grad out of design school (artwork and websites).
I'd trash that footer bar with the social media stuff. Maybe put some of those things in the contact section.