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  • detritus0

    You really need to sort out the anchor highlight onClick - ever cake I look at has two dashed lines crossing it. Very messy. Also - why do these cake images not have some kdin of description? Sure, they look tasty, but is it not a bit of a leap to go from image to order without anything else?

    Drop shadow from main area is .. not nice. In fact - hint of 'book' with leaves on right hand side, is clumsy and aimless - i'd just go with the light grey keyline and be done with trying to make it look like 'pages'.

    "The pie's Gay Cousin"? I'm fairly liberal but even I can appreciate that's a *bit* contentious.

    Overall, I think it's almost really great, but the above quibbles coupled with the confusing nav hierachy make me think you need to get out of the box you've got yourself into and get some external perspective.

    And yeah - facebook-styled 'like' button looks nasty there.

    • just to clarify—overall look is spot-on and really well done. It's just the details in the UI I dislike. Good luck!detritus
    • Exactly the reason I posted this. I appreciate the constructive criticism. Thanks.fowleryo

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