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  • Bluejam0

    ajzthompson,

    Your 'objectives' and 'skills' sections could be written better (IMO). Inject a little personality or humor to your words, creative directors are humans too! There's nothing better than reading something that puts a smile on yer face, it'll make it more memorable as well.

    Objectives
    Start off with a bold, ballsy statement..I AM A SKILLED PROFESSIONAL! Also, everyone wants to work for a 'stable, progressive company'. Say something complementary. I WANT TO WORK FOR THE BEST COMPANY.

    Skills
    Everyone, by default, should know all the applications that you've listed. Talk more about what you have done, less what tools you used. For example, Design, I'M A TEAM PLAYER WHO CAN COME UP WITH IDEAS, PRODUCE CONCEPTS ON DEMAND AND EXECUTE CREATIVE PROJECTS 9 TO 5 AND BEYOND...something like that.

    just a few thoughts...

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