Resume Critique

Out of context: Reply #4

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  • mitsu0

    2 things i see.

    -first, you might want to change the wording in your objective, it doesn't sound right. you might change

    "This would give me great ambition and I would reach my full potential."

    to

    This would give me great ambition and allow me to reach my full potential.

    or something like that.

    -second, i'd structure the data more to make it easier to read. i should be able to scan your resume and easily find your hire dates, tenure, where it was exactly that you worked, etc.

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