Very clever CV

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    I watched it again, and now it's my turn to nit-pick.

    Visually, the composition's off. The supers in the intro don't have enough room to breathe, relative to his placement in frame.

    Secondly, there's a black hole to his left, because of the light coming from camera left is throwing bad shadow.

    Thirdly, the guitar's got to go; his head, specs/glass of water and old-school phone form a triangle, and the guitar kills the flow of the shape (as well as being in the cast shadow).

    Still, I like that he had the balls to do this.

    • There is a fine line between bravery and stupidity.
      —Francisco Escario
      luckyorphan
    • maybe he got a pair of diesel. lol.akrok

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