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- fresnobob0
Maybe try making the bottom of the curve in the "p" disconnected in a similar fashion to the "e"?
I feel like having "e" being the only character like that makes it stand out too much. I notice the modified "i" immediately and then notice the modified "e" next, and then the "il" ligature (however I'm kinda with ukit on it being too much). I get the meaning of the "i," but not of the other two so they seem sorta arbitrary in a way. I think if you modified the "p" it would make the odd both it and the"e"'s modification more of a style thing and less a meaning thing so the "i" will really stand out.