Graduate portfolio crit

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  It's very stark, and I don't necessarily mean that in a bad way. Your work is often very militaristic, not just in subject matter but in tone, look and feel.

  That said, between the futuristic logo, the content and the choice of headline type (H&F-J type always strikes me as more sublime that tough and aggressive, with a couple of exceptions) I think you need to refine a uniform style for yourself.

  Nonetheless, you do good work; I don't think it will take long for you to find something in The Real World™.

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  • thanks, yeah I didn't update the logo for this new version so it may be a bit out of place, I'll definitely look into refining the style of the siteNutter
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