Logo Crit
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- kona0
the kerning could be tightened up a bit. the space between the "w" and "h" is really tight in comparison to the space between the "h" and "a". make them all uniform and it will go a long way.
i don't like how the "a" descender drops below the baseline.
i don't think you need the ...? at the end. i believe the "what if" implies a question as is, the ...? is just redundant and makes the logo a bit awkward and compositionally off. also you already have an upside down question mark as the "i".
learning should be spaced out a bit more (watch it's kerning also) and maybe offset to the right just below the "f".
i'm not much of an identity guy and couldn't tell you a whole lot about the typeface you used, but learning i think it's a great start. i like the little dude made into the upside down question mark.
- also if they do use the ...? in their logo they need to figure out what their domain name is gonna be with the ...?kona