Site critique
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- kona0
nice start Irafis.
my thoughts:
- shrink the navigation text quite a bit
- explore what the villa can offer text should be much larger and a bit more creatively placed/handled within that space
- the same can be said for the 3 images on the right. up that text a bit
- the starfish should be above the bottom line as it would give the illusion of a bit more depth to the page. same for the palm tree. it should be above the lines.
- if you added a medium sized subhead line below your hero image, and a small paragraph of text (in arial, maybe a medium gray like 666666), you could add a small subhead and very small paragraphs of text underneath each of the 3 images with a short call to action something like .... 'see what the philippines has to offer >'
that would really help. right now ask yoruself this... as a user what do i click on? none of the images say 'click me' metaphorically speaking of course. don't put a 'click me' button anywhere over them ya know.nice start. keep pushing!