Portfolio Critique

Out of context: Reply #6

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  • showpony0

    i agree with iceberg... the shell is working, and your logo is interesting, but i'd consider removing some of those pieces (the disco poster and some of those logos in particular) until you get something a little bit stronger. also, maybe you can focus on some of your more successful pieces, like the time tunnel work (maybe have larger images of that?) or the rally car until you can round things out a bit more? good start though.

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