Logo critique

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• fresnobob0

  work on the proportions of your layouts. i.e where the logo is placed on the business card. Youre trying to keep the space around the logo even, but it makes you cram all the type into the bottom little section and it looks really ugly. You also have your logo center justified and the type left. Since you have a line running through the center of the logo implying symmetry/centering, why not compose the type as such also? Look up classical page proportions for more inspiration.

  Oh, and the way you are lining up to your rules is inconsistent. the sign has space on both sides, as does the business card, but the letterhead has the type aligning to the ends.

  and i like the light on dark color scheme better

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  • thanks for the good feedback, looking up classical page proportions now! :)instil_design

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