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- d0mino0
- probably needs some texture.d0mino
- I don't think the colours have enough contrast to make this feel positive.Amicus
- make the type white, will feel much fresherKiggen
- I think you could warp the whole thing a little so it looks like its comming towards you a little. Also agree on the white type.slappy
- http://operationever… yellow version ?d0mino
- i read it backwardsJG_LB
- I read it the right way strangely, so for me it does work. Drop the arrow thoughDancer
- that line is killing the composition, needs more contrast too********
- Yah, the line is not helping me at all. I started at Elevation Constant then got it.********
- I feel white type would work better, and maybe do something with scale to lead the eye.********
- The yellow looks better, but white would 'pop' nicely. Apart from that it's sweet!goldieboy
