help with self promo work

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  • harv0

    Mono thanks for the great break down (destruction). You are terribly wrong with the font though, its Century Gothic.

    The overlapping circles are something Ive always like, something that has always caught my eye. Unfortunately If I want to look like a photographer Id have to put a bunch of cameras and lenses on my card or have my own photos on there and that's something I wont do.
    The slash was to separate the URL and number in another version. I forgot to clear it.

    I almost knew the answer of my own questions, because it was almost thoughtless Id expect a critique to match.
    I'm going to do just as bzsaw said and do some drawing to come up with what I like and dislike.

    One thing I'm trying to stray from is over designing my material. Because I want the focus of the viewer to remember that I'm a photographer (the reason I went with krop.com for my portfolio).

    Once again thanks for the words of wisdom!

    • Century Gothic and Futura are close enough to say that I wasn't "terribly wrong." I only looked at your work for 2 seconds.monospaced
    • 2 seconds.monospaced
    • I was hoping my comment could be a critique, forcing you to address the issues that the viewer has.monospaced
    • I wasn't just bashing, I hope you know. I won't give you exact instructions, I don't believe in that.monospaced
    • thanks mono, I looked at the two fonts and saw the similarities. I do appologizeharv

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