Scripty Modifications

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• Josev0

  I think the S looks like it's slightly heavier than the other characters and I'm not sure about the entrance loop, as you called it. Also, I'm kind of bothered by the way the end of the J's lower loop cuts through the a. Maybe make the J's loop bigger, more open and have it connect at the top of the a?

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  • I think it looks good overall. I dont mind the overlap of they's tail with the q, but the h's doesnt feel right. It's too angular. The counter in the a, the beginning loop on the cap S and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev
  • angular and doesnt have the nice curves of the other forms. The counter in the a, the beginning loop on the cap S and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev
  • and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev

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