which 1?
which 1?
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I dont think the color is the issue. In addition to the begging, the subtitle says "give from your heart". but what i see is the Haitians begging -and from THEIR heart. the heart is coming from WITHIN them... see that? It just doesn't make any sense, executionally. Falls kinda flat. I'm not sure how to connect the wording to the graphic. It's like you just outlined some Haitians and put a heart on them, and now you want to forcefully draw out some emotional response from people - which i dont think will happen. it's nice that you're doing it, but there's nothing interesting or smart about it.
If this is just a quick thing to raise some $$ for haiti, thats cool. im just over-analyzing it.