down and dirty design review
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- fibonacci0
Ok, I looked through all your work. It's all very average. Lots of mistakes, lots of unpolished ideas or design choices.
It would be a lot of effort to actually do a project-by-project breakdown of those mistakes. So instead, some more general advice.
The Malbec, Wyland Wines, and Industry Open House (save that horrid pixel effect you used) are your strongest pieces. Open with one of those (instead of the Ooples logo). I would almost consider dropping the Ooples logo completely, I think it's crude.
Get your layout for the site fixed. The left-edge of the box where all your images appear should be beyond the right-most-edge of the ".com" in
That will also give you room to make the navigation at least 0.5pt bigger, but hopefully a full 1pt bigger.