website crit please
website crit please
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Style aside, I feel that there are some elements competing for my immediate attention, and it's making it hard to focus.
1) Bull & Bear logo
2) "Finance stripped down..."
3) "our story - who's in charge now?"
4) "your essentials" (but to a lesser extent)Feels like you need to nail down a clearer hierarchy of information. The logo could go a lot smaller, the tagline probably shouldn't be screaming for attention in a black script. I can't wait to see where this goes.