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  • j1983m0

    i think this maybe one of those cases where you have been looking at this solution far too much and are trying to force it and make it work. often if it doesnt look quite right to start with, a lot of crafting will make it worse. in this case, for me its still not working... the r and o dont sit well together, nor do the u and d, the o o t looks weird on the end too. You deff need the P as uppercase, try the whole thing as uppercase too.

    You should look at different typefaces and different directions. Proudfoot is a wonderful word - this doesnt look wonderful yet! Park this idea and move on, thats where you will really break the mark!

    • well trying it with a different font could be a good start.. the f and t on this one aren't nice anyway..janne76

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